Question:
A poem about God?????
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2012-06-01 14:22:52 UTC
Okay so I'm writing a poem about God for Church && I need help. I am soo bad at writing poems I've always been. But here is my poem so far:
God always cares
He even hears my prayers
There's never a moment when he's not listening
&& idk what to say after cause I need words tht rhyme. Can someone please give me 2 words that rhyme to go in my poem or can someone give me any ideas of what to do next I please ask if the words can kind of be church related. && I know my poem is bad you don't have to tell me if thts what your thinking. Please help !!!!!!!! :/
Six answers:
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2012-06-01 14:28:29 UTC
When running into trouble with rhyming you can always change the way you say something, still saying the same thing. For example, were you having trouble with your next line, finding something to rhyme with "listening", you might change that line to something like, "Never a moment He doesn't hear" instead, and then maybe "the voices of those He holds dear". Just an example!
2012-06-01 21:39:54 UTC
I have a poem about God:



If God Popped Up



I don't know what I'd say

If God popped from the sky

But I'd try to find some things to say

If I saw Him eye to eye



I'd ask Him if I was here at all

And was He really there?

And how it is I know,I know

And does He really care?



How would He know how to answer me

In a language I could hear?

I'd ask how far Heaven was

And was it very near?



And why it was,with just one truth

There were so many beliefs?

And why it was that things with tops

Had to have underneaths?



Anything He had to say

Could even be a lie

And if I suggested this to Him

Would it make Him cry?



He might not even respond at all

And not even notice me

But one thing's for sure,whatever He did

We could never even agree



On whether He had popped from the sky

Or why I have to die

Or even what agreement was

Or how He made the eye



Because He gave me a mind

With which to question Him

So He cannot find me at fault

If I dismiss Him on a whim



Or utilise a rationale

That was bestowed on me

By the progression of the human mind

Which set free-thinkers free



He's only got Himself to blame

For everything He's made

I could only thank God that we're not all the same

And for those that still believe in Him,He should really be afraid
2012-06-01 21:25:10 UTC
I wish I was Wayne Brady.



I could give you a novel of poetry by 5pm
Karl
2012-06-01 21:24:44 UTC
There's this site called Rhymezone which can help you, best wishes for your future endeavors.
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2012-06-01 21:24:14 UTC
why dont you ask god how to do it?
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2012-06-01 21:25:35 UTC
god is gay. the end


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