Poem is by my Husband when he first met Jesus in jail.Do you consider this as good as a spoken testimony?

Question

Blood stained, graffiti’d walls
Silent teardrops fall, as I walk these halls
Just another number with no name
Cuffed and shackled, led in chains
Filled with anger, hatred and disgrace
I told myself “Never again”
Yet here I am
They’ve got me now
No way out of this jam
Forever a felon, it’s all downhill from here
Probation, yeah right
Gotta do the time
Caught up in the system, probably for life
Or is that just what they want me to think?
‘Cause I’ve heard of others who were in chains
Who trusted in the One called the Ancient of Days
Innocent of any crime
Condemned to death
Yet with their last breath
Spoke of a life that no man can take
Freedom that no man can break
About a messiah who died so we might live
Who gave all he could possibly give
Would I have ever truly learned
Would my soul have been bought
Probably died and burned
If I’d never got caught
I rejoice in this jail cell
Acquited by God
I’ll not see hell
In the everlasting court
I walk a free man.

Answer 1

Mighty Fine Stuff!



I hope the unabridged version does contain HIS name - Jesus!

Answer 2

a couple of reminders for him.....First, don't ever give up, God has the final say.

and no matter what he did, God forgives him. and he will not see hell. 2nd. never say "i found Jesus or God, for one they are not the ones that are loset..we are...and yes, this is a great testamony. God Bless you and your family Always....Keep Your Faith High........p/s..would have really liked to have read the whole thing.

Answer 3

Great Stuff,

Thanks for sharing.

A testimony is anything that tells of what we have seen, heard, or experienced.

My prayers are with you and your husband.

Answer 4

Wow. Great testimony. It might even make a good rap.

Answer 5

This is a well done poem. I liked the flow, and the message was good too.

Answer 6

I like it! I hope others read it. It really brings to life what God can do in a person's life. Thanks for sharing!